Scott:

He looks pretty good. It would have been nice to see her involved as well to make a more interesting looking presentation. Also, if you are going to do a play blast remember to turn off locators, joints, etc so it is only the character and props visible.

Johann Wong:

Explore poses, yeh. Overall animation looks stiff, you can start by adding more curves in your spine. ;)

Erin Goddard:

A good start, I like some of the facial expressions. Some of your hand movements feel a bit erratic and unnatural, try acting it out and filming yourself. Keep it up!

Luke Coleman:

Eye movements are off. Needs more secondary motion and micro gestures / expressions.

Sergio Montenegro:

there's several jumps in animation here and there.