Anger Over Tea
by Julia Young
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Looks like you're on the right track but finish it!
Looks unfinished? Could barely see whats going, though. xD Poses looks alright from here.
I gotta say, I think this would have been wonderful... if it had been more finished.
Im not sure what you wanted reviewed here, if it was lip sync/facial animation or body movements, because they're both underdeveloped. If it was facial features and lipsync and not the body form, you should have that all the way through and the bodies basic, and vice versa, but the form is jerky and there isnt a lot of detail on the lip sync you do have. at the end (140) there really isnt anything to judge.
You have some skill, so next time, if you dont want to make an entire animation focus on what you want to improve and what you want judged and put all the effort on that.
I would LOVE to have seen this finished! Your style lends itself to animation quite well, and your roughs are hitting all the right beats. Only suggestion would be to crop in a bit so we can see the characters better
Animator: Julia Young
Description: I decided 2 days ago that I wanted to do every 11SecClub of 2017 as a New Year's resolution. With only 5 hours to work on this, feedback is welcome! I will finish this as a showreel piece and I will give myself more time for the competitions to come.
Experience: 3 years university, 9 months professional
Time taken: 5 hours