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Random couple's fight...

by Debayan Das

Final Rating: 5.73. Finished 25 out of 93 entries.

564 views including the voting period.


Animator: Debayan Das

Description: A little conversation between a divorce husband and wife about their present condition turns into a heated argument...

Experience: some years

Time taken: 15 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Zoe Piel:

Interesting interpretation of the dialogue into an original scene.

Donald Marks:

Good Setup, nice execution.... one note. That hair is made of helium or somethin. REAALLLLY bouncy. tone that back a bit. In fact you can just go into the curves editor and scale the curves down a bit here and that would fix it :P

Luke Coleman:

Love the secondary movement and weighting. However a couple of things let it down; the camera position is too far away and combined with the lighting make it very difficult to see soem of their facial expressions. The last thing is not really related to the animation, but the shot of the reflection is too quick, if it were 1 or 2 seconds longer would make it easier to tell what he is looking at. Regardless, well done!

Felipe Navarro:

Great story, i think we are too far left with the characters, just seems like a small space to have all the animation take place. Great work though.

Jordan Lewers:

Interesting concept, and I like the animation a lot! My only gripe is that the staging is a bit off. If you give more space to the guy's left, that should fix things. We don't really need to see all of the pyramid