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what you see with Opera glass??

by Alireza

Final Rating: 5.16. Finished 38 out of 142 entries.

569 views including the voting period.


Animator: Alireza

Description: A man is describing an animal which called: "SWAN"!

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: One week


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Michael Launder:

i like this one a lot! i feel like you could push the camera in a bit more! lets see your awesome work! also it feels like your missing some narrow mouth shapes (not sure if the rig has that capability) especially when the hat guy says "swan" you can get a great narrow shape that goes to wide and it would feel amazing!

Sajid Ali Mansoori:

Nice Animation. Good Concept.



Lidiya Azhar:

Oooh, this one is nice! This looks like two guys out for a relaxing bird watching activity, anticipating to find something exotic but not really quite getting that.

Really nice arcs with the arms. Around frame 95 the hatless guy's eyebrow jumps around a bit. I think it could look better if you would push the poses more; Exaggerate the line of action. For example, when the hatless guy turns to look at screen right, his body would shift to another pose. Overall, I find this animation very nicely done. :)

Toby Leung:

love the render. lip-syncing is very well done too.