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Inspector looking for lost dall

by nabil

Final Rating: 4.18. Finished 75 out of 142 entries.

496 views including the voting period.


Animator: nabil

Description: Inspector asking a farmaer about a dall being lost in jungle

Experience: 15 month (practicing)

Time taken: 10 Days (45 Hour)


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Michael Launder:

loosen up that torso mate! you have a great opportunity where the farmer can be leaning ont he shovel and bare moving his hand while he describes the swan, right now he's standing super rigid the whole time and its kind of awkward to watch. also i'd concentrate more on animation than rendering personally. i dont think its helped you out here

Jay Jörg Smith:

The framing is not choosen that well, work on that ;) Watch tutorials on eye animation could also help you.