Unhappy first day at work
by Damian Pajda
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Good idea and animation. The shadow on the wall distracted me from her performance.
I'm really digging this animation! Good work. My only critique is just when she leaves the office, it seems the door slammed shut without her even touching it, and it felt a little rushed there. I'd hope this makes top 11.
Animation quality looks great! but i dialog seems more high pitched. But action seems casual. But i love the body actions going on! Great!
Ok this one gets a comment , There is appeal in you story idea but i think you could have exaggerated the part where she breaks the object a bit more , coloring the scene with some other activity at the same time could have work. .
That's great, lots of nice little nuances. Love the BOSS picture too ;)
If there had been some audio for the door slamming, it would've been better.
pretty good animation, well done and I do like it however I am not sure if it fit the audio. It felt kind of lazy if I can say that
nice animation, bt the ending was really strange..
I liked it a lot. animation is very nicely done. Plus the actions are slightly subdued. its different from the rest of the entries
The animation is ok but the scene make no sense
mocap in an animation competition?, I don't know how to rate this....
Animation is smooth but IMO the acting lacks the energy of the audio, big disconnect between the two.
Animator: Damian Pajda
Description: She's ambitious girl and get a new dream job.
But her first day at work isn't what she dreamed about...
Experience: 5 years (game animation)
Time taken: about 50 hours