Navaneeth:

nice poses!
You need to work on the timing in the end coz it feels a little floaty.
You may also need to work on the lip sync in the beginning .

Keep up the spirit and keep animating!! :)

john:

seems kinda static some poses some snapping

Amartya Mukherji:

Lacks fundamentals

Eshan:

Sorry if its obvious, but i dont get the camera zooming in throughout the shot.

Moby:

Movement between major poses a little cluncky. Smoothing out the motion and attempting to have different parts arrive at next pose at slightly different times will make the shot stronger. Good effort.