Final Rating: 3.96. Finished 109 out of 179 entries.

563 views including the voting period.


Animator: James Van Dam

Description: This is a Wip that I would love to get feed back on. My job swamped me with 12 hour days for 14 days in a row. I learned I need to be faster/more productive.

Experience: 3 1/2 years

Time taken: At least an hour a night for a month.


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Nice work !!

She had her eyes closed most of the time..and in the end it feels like she's blind.
Would look a lot better if u follow a different acting choice with the eyes.

keep on practicing ...have fun :)


Nice poses and camera move. Right hand a little off. Great effort

ben malberg:

Hey I like your pull out at the end with the camera, and how she's walking towards us. Nice idea. Definitely needs more work on the tightness of the poses, and timing/spacing.

Justin Jones:

This has some interesting poses. The animation feels stiff in some areas.

Michael Covell:

Eyes at the end dont look right!

Jesse Angri:

Definitely smooth out your graph editor and get in some good overlapping action.

Steven Jones:

I think the cut you have could be moved to right as the word "Party" begins. It's a good idea to try to cut either on pauses in dialog or on louder sounds or "pops".

Ranvir Singh:

Nice, first thing is animation is flowty and jerky..and mechancal problems...

Amartya Mukherji:

too many jitters . your animation needs a lot of improvement


very sexi and very active :D