Guy on the roof
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I'll note at least two things: with the ending 'snap' of the antenna, the boy just simply pulls it towards him before falling despite already leaning over the ledge. The leg at 59-64 breaks a bit. Overall, there's quite a bit can be improved upon. Hoping to see improvements with your next works.
First of all i question your ability to think before you leap . You place a female voice on a male character and worst of its a litle boy . My point being is that your performance should be believable . Make things seem possible even if it may not .The animation its self really went in the right direction , some stronger poses should have been present to really sell this shot to us .Hope to see u do even more next time around .Id keep my eyes on this .
It's a funny idea, and I laughed when the antenna broke. I think it needs a lot more work but the idea is good.
how the spin takes 168-frame to 220-frame you could make 2 or 3 turns to put more action at scene
but its clearly a woman's voice..why a kid?
I like your choices - animation is not prostar, but your acting direction made me smile - at least its different.
Description: The Guy is drunken and he is dancing on the roof...
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