Beauty is Trouble... !! :p
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the Mery poses are very nice. The flow is nice and smooth with snappy timing. I liked the way she juggles the phone. But I felt Malcom to be slightly distracting at times. The way you have framed it is very hard to figure out what is the story going on. Anyways, - Very nice animation and timing.
Good concept and well executed, Very good.
really nice movement with both characters. everything reads super clear which is great.
I just have a couple of notes.
1. I would take a look at the screen left arm at the beginning. It feels like it's out too much but that my be just me.
2. Work on pushing the facial animation more. You have a very pushed cartooney body but the face doesn't seem to get pushed as much.
3. Fix the knee pops.
Keep up the hard work!
Animator: Mandeep Singh Virdi
Description: Beautiful nurse busy on the phone, NOT so good for the guy under the X-Ray machine..
Experience: 5 Years on and off..
Time taken: After work,10 -15 days...