John Alston:

I think he/she's letting too much camera movement seem to punch through the animation, which is impressive but also a bit aggresive. Ideally, I think the viewer should be able to see a scene that plays out organically.

Ben Ross:

The animation of the characters looks really fluid and dynamic, especially with the one that looks like a floating spinal column with a head. The presentation appears excellent with its toon-drawn CGI visual style. The expressions and emotional delivery even appear well done.

Good work!