Comments:
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Erik Romão:
staging could be better. why is so much of the frame empty?
Vicent Matoses:
investing in some more animation could have increased the punctuation inmensly
Kyle Newton:
There's a lot of negative space in this composition. All of the action is taking up maybe 1/10th of the frame. Definitely zoom in if the acting is going to be subtle, or go much bigger with the performance if the audience is kept at a distance as big as this.
Animator: Garry Gray
Description: Some drama at a stand selling refreshments. A volunteer breaks down.
Experience: I have been experimenting with animation since 2014. Training for about a year though.
Time taken: 14 days. 2 Weeks. Estimate about a couple hrs a day at most.