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Animator: Marta

Description: Have you ever uploaded a video? Maybe to a very well-known video page? Have you ever received a bad commentary or, even worse, a dislike?

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 3 hours a day for 2 weeks

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Miguel Fern√°ndez:

The cigarette is top

Space Chicken:

What is this guy smoking?

Marta:

THIS IS THE MOST FANTASTIC ANIMATION I'VE EVER SEEN

Inacio:

nice setting and movement

Spencer Bentley:

I like the character animation, but the lip syncing needs some work.

Bryce Hallett:

Nice acting :)

The mouths can use a bit more precision though. I don't know if it's just how it's playing back for me. The man's lips look pretty could and suit the tone.
I think the woman''s mouth mostly works but right around where she says " F word" it's not quite hitting. Maybe make more of an o shape mouth fo the start of "word" and if you anticipate that shape by animating into it on "F" from an open mouth position down to the "oo" shape for word and then jsut slightly open that to a bit wider o shape near the end of "Word" it should flow nicely into " every" afterwords .

I hope that made sense
good job over all :)