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I can show you the body

by Ashleigh Hwang

Final Rating: 2.90. Finished 143 out of 168 entries.

247 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ashleigh Hwang

Description: uni project

Experience: second year

Time taken: we had 4 weeks


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Ceasar Villegas:

Too much negative space on screen left, tighten the camera up on character. Better silhouettes as the hand over the face. Super important to move the core as the character looks flat and unconvincing.