Final Rating: 3.36. Finished 189 out of 314 entries.

4,843 views including the voting period.


Animator: Daniel Puga

Description: Two guys hanging out in the supermarket, but one of them is not having his best day, and the other is going to notice that.

Experience: My first animation

Time taken: 4 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jamie F:

Be careful of the 180 rule

Lauren Kimball:

Camera angles are jarring -- do more with less, and also make sure to respect the 180 rule.

Paraskevi Koutalou:

good, though i find the switch a bit confusing

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice setup but you should always try to keep the characters on the same side of the screen to avoid confusion. Try looking up the 180 rule in camera work


Weird cuts, layout is strange.