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Laptop Argument


Final Rating: 2.42. Finished 278 out of 314 entries.

1,697 views including the voting period.



Description: Two teens at a table when one starts to hum, the other can't concentrate.

Experience: Animation Student

Time taken: 10 Hours


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Dean Mosier:

I would really go back to the basics of animation before I would enter a competition. All of the 12 principles are being completely ignored and your camera work is disorienting to say the least. When starting out, find an appealing camera angle and don't touch it. Leave it alone until you grasp a better understanding of composition and editing. I'll just leave it at that.