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Two Alcoholic in the bar

by vipin mahar

Final Rating: 5.58. Finished 76 out of 314 entries.

13,657 views including the voting period.


Animator: vipin mahar

Description: two strangers talking with each other in the bar.

Experience: some

Time taken: 2 Days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Marcos Elias:

good animation, but bad stage, you should make a better cam.

Lauren Kimball:

You should bring the camera in closer.

Alexander Julius:

Why is the shot so far away? Other than that, I enjoy the acting choices!

Poppy Marlow:

would've been great if the camera was closer

Elisabeth Janerka:

The framing could be a bit closer though as they become a bit small in the frame


you could use a better staging (maybe use this camera for a stablishing shot, the cut for a close up), another tip is to stop the guy singing a little earlier

Ramon Arango:

don't playblast with film gate please. That framing makes the characters very small for no reason.

Celine Heijnen:

Pretty good animation. But I would put the camera closer to the characters. It's too far away to notice details.

Henry Barbee:

Wow, pretty good! You should turn off the safe zone for your camera though, cause it’s really zoomed out right now. Also the hud, so there’s no info onscreen.

Samuel Bourland:

I think some different framing would guide the watchers focus better.