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by Chad Cox
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William Barry Eggington:
I remember this one from the forum. I can see the refinements you have made. Well done.
Beautiful background! The character in the back walking feels a bit too stiff, but the guy at the computer has me fully convinced he's alive! Great job. Just be careful and keep an eye out for unintentional cross-eyed characters. Computer guy goes cross-eyed starting at 213
R Dale Harper:
The taking off of the glasses was really great. Really great.
Watch the knees and the weight shifts. The hips reaction to the weight transfer isn't reading.
The sitting guy's head shake could be smoothed.
Cool acting choices. Nothing is overdone.
Acting is great. Could use work on the walking and body mechanics.
Very well done, especially the guy on the laptop. Really natural looking movements, pushed well too though
rendering doesnt cover up bad animation /story
awesome, just need some improvement in walk ....
I love how you cut off the ending. You can feel how the sitting guy's attention is torn between his screen and listening to the other guy talk. Impressive!
really great !
Animator: Chad Cox
Description: A young scientist is brought back to reality by his mentor.
Time taken: 4 weeks of nights and weekends