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But It's Nominal!
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Like the different rhythms of the character and the idea. :D Really fun. However, I am not sure the angry attitude is working. The voice just sounds to nicely sarcastic. Arms are moving back and forth a bit too much and don't make pleasant overlaps. Love your storytelling and that it has the taste of something bigger happening.
Camera good... Story good... Just too choppy in the characters acting yet the t-rex is reeeeeaaally floaty and slooowwly creeping through the town. Ask yourself, "would I hear 'rhythmic pounding' with those steps?"... Hope that helps :)
Interesting scene and story direction. You'll want to go back and lock down their poses, and smooth out the jittery movement in their animations(mostly the walk cycles).
The ending where tthe dinosaur was walking felt too long
Animator: Andjela Jokovic
Description: Thought I might make a funny story with an unexpected twist! Had so much fun animating this!
I did animation, lighting, compositing, camera, story, editing.
Experience: I'm 18 years old student, so no actual professional experience yet!
Time taken: Around 3-4 days