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by Matthew Koh
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William Barry Eggington:
Very well done.
Pretty cool looks and acting choices. You put a lot of effort in this one. Winner for me.
Nice drawings! Try for more dynamic poses and timing.
Very nice, way to go 2D also.
This is real nice! That ending is awesome too, lots of smooth natural movements here
Cristy L. Einung:
This looks beautiful.
The facial expression on the first character doesn't give the idea that he is suspicious at the start. Otherwise a very solid composition overall.
Great animation and story direction. The ending characters re-actions are to fast and its hard to read the poses with its current timing(frames 313-331). Adding a couple inbetweens can help solve this timing issue.
Çağtay Kubilay Güraras:
Great style and colors. I think you might exaggerate the main poses a bit. Try to bit more confident with the poses. Good work!!
Hey :) Your shot is very beautiful, but I would just maybe add a bit more exaggeration on the labial, maybe play a bit with the jaw of your characters also, but that's a very great shot ! Keep going animating ! :)
Best one I've seen so far. Good stretch and squash and sudden expressive movements.
Great style and character. I feel like it doesn't need that forced ending - that's nitpicking though :)
George John Bowden:
No need for ending. Takes away from rest of your good work. Dont fall ill of 11 Second club syndrome.
Animator: Matthew Koh
Description: Running a steampunk factory can be risky.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 4 weeks