Final Rating: 6.42. Finished 16 out of 96 entries.

593 views including the voting period.


Animator: Stephen K

Description: Clumsy old Laurice is at it again! what's he done this time.

--- I ran out of time on most of the shots, only the second one has the most love in it. Original Idea was to have people outside the ship drowning and banging on the window.

Experience: A few years

Time taken: 40 hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Marten Visser:

Cool. Good acting, especially the guy with the glasses. I only think the last camera position could be better. Feels a bit weird.

Marckus Duverger:

This is good, the only problem I have is that 3rd camera cut is really jarring & actually hurts the scene. I think if you take that out or figure out a way to transition better it'll look much stronger overall. It's still good though

Jose Velasquez:

My only comment would be the quick cut that happens in the middle of the video. It seems a bit odd.

Cristy L. Einung:

The change of shot around 195 feels strange because the difference between the position of the cameras is not big enough, other than that it looks very good!

Koushik Chatterjee:

awesome !! i really like the shock of the small guy, and the characteristics.

Howard Cameron:

Very nice work on Tom

Ryan Hill:

Interesting composition and camera cuts. Make sure the characters poses are balanced and not clipping through their props.

Samuel Couffe:

Very interesting animation ! Maybe improve the labiale, bring a bit more exaggeration around the mouth would make it even better, but I really like your shot ! Keep going ! :)

Thibaut Huet:

The animation is really good for the sound ! But there is a transition probleme frame 190