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Needs some work with your arcs, feels robotic
Movements look stiff.
Is the twist here that he's using, what, concrete containers, or?... it's not really that clear, since he IS pouring into what appears to be two glasses.
camera work looks sloppy... it looks rather shaky. The shoulder looks off around 180.. and I don't think what the guy's doing around frame 234 is suitable to the line
His arms are too distracting
Animator: Carolyn Mennecke
Description: Pretty straightforward - a girl goes to a guy's house for the first time, but he fails to impress her because he pours their wine into plastic cups.
Experience: 2 years self-taught
Time taken: Three weeks