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Not the best business plan...

by TiffanyW

Final Rating: 3.49. Finished 108 out of 136 entries.

254 views including the voting period.


Animator: TiffanyW

Description: Bonnie doubts her ability to work her new employer, Franklin, at the local jewelry store.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Felipe Navarro:

Good story, characters move too slow, and in some instances feels like they are floating.

Heather Richmond:

The guy's elbows are twitching when he is leaning against the case.

Jean Lamy:

Timing and body language needs work.