Final Rating: 5.46. Finished 46 out of 231 entries.

672 views including the voting period.


Animator: Justin Jones

Description: My first 11 second club entry!

Experience: 1.5 years

Time taken: month


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AR Bullock:

Love this! The style is great, the "Marco's Meat" setting begs the question of why the vegetarian is there and makes the conversation extra amusing, and the shopkeeper's face on "What about the sausage?" is hilarious! The only thing that feels off to me is the way the vegetarian changes poses between the first and second shots we see of him...

David Ramirez:

haha I love the expressions and movements/poses.
The lip-sync is too fast to read though.
I think it would be good to see just one or two frames for the transition to sausage pose, was a bit too quick.

Richard Adams:

Very well drawn. Some timing issues, butcher's body feels quite stiff.

Alissar Kobeissi:

Fun style of animating

Yogesh Paradkar:

what was That?????????

not good

S J Bennett:

Very entertaining lipsync in this but it zips by so quickly!

Joep de Laat:

fun designs and style, static acting without much body language... I understand that's partially style based, but some movements don't go together with what is said and feel like tricks.

Adrian Winchell:

Awesome that you've done 2D here! I feel the motions are too fast and broad for the short time they're visible. It would be nice if, instead of your exterior shot, you'd provided an establishing shot showing the characters' positions relative to one another. It looks like they could be in two totally unrelated locations the way they're set up now.

Niklas Bergwall:

Lol, love the style!

Ramsey Parks:

The lip sync is off a lot, but I like your style.

Lucas Donaldson:

Nice individual movements. though, I'm not sure how they all fit together and go with the dialogue.

Sabrina Winkel:

The characters close their eyes too much. I would try to fix that and when the character holds his finger up and smiles... And frowns again. It doesn't look too realistic.