Final Rating: 3.01. Finished 200 out of 231 entries.

485 views including the voting period.


Animator: Angell

Description: Rough rough Polish Pass.

Experience: 1 1/2 Years

Time taken: 4 Weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Adrian Winchell:

Just needs more - more poses, more accent, more emotion, more everything. Nothing particularly sticky-outy, the basics are there, just need to spend more time giving the characters their acting.

Joep de Laat:

your camera does not focus on the active character, in the first shot you focus on the red man while he does not do a lot, while the blue man talks and moves and is not in focus. also switching a pose in a cut does not work with the continuity

Sabrina Winkel:

I like how the red guy touched his head at the end and love the acting

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

When he lifts the chickens they seem weightless.