Lea:

Try not to do a frontal staging next time, a 3/4 staging is much better for this kind of shot.

Adrian Winchell:

Wow, you've got massive anticipation on here - much more than you need. Watch your timing and arcs when he reaches for the sausage - it seems a bit choppy there.

Lucas Donaldson:

You can tell what's happening and what the character is thinking which is great. what may need to happen next is for there to be some fluidity of motion so it look natural.

Sabrina Winkel:

I like the hand gestures and the part when he throws the sausage over his shoulder