Final Rating: 3.42. Finished 172 out of 231 entries.

483 views including the voting period.


Animator: Tafrey Mongkuo

Description: My first submission for the 11 Second Club!
It's been really fun to work on!

Experience: ~2.5 years animating in Maya

Time taken: 6 individual work days over 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Adrian Winchell:

Could use a little more focus on posing the hands with the gestures. Also, play around with the ends of the motions- a few ease-ins where there are bouncebacks here would really push this to the next level! The weight dropping more carefully, just ease forward when red sits up rather than rebounding, and you'll have better texture to this I think.

Lucas Donaldson:

Animation is good. but, the motion blur is so it's kinda hard to see what's happening.

James Hornby:

looks good! but you crossed the line of action at frame 250 ish. It made it a little confusing as to who he is talking to. It's not set in stone but try to assign a side of the screen for you character before you start. It definitely helps me when planning my shots

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

At the 100 mark the hand fold was awkward.