Final Rating: 2.50. Finished 222 out of 231 entries.

552 views including the voting period.


Animator: Roxanne Lynch

Description: one harryed eyed comedian imitates the unspeakable conversation from "Everything is Illuminated". A dangerous diet in perilous times.

Experience: notalot

Time taken: bou'4 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Adrian Winchell:

What IS wrong with him? It's a neat idea to have him talking to himself, but I'd love to see that accomplished through cutting, a la Gollum vs Smrgol, then cut out to have him sitting in a padded room. Rather than an abstract black and red stripe? I'm really at a loss for context here @_@

Ramsey Parks:

I like the split personality idea, but maybe do something with the emotions to tell the difference between the two.

Richard Adams:

Extremely floaty. Lacks fundamentals.

Sam Caudill:

what's up with the eyes?

Lucas Donaldson:

I like the idea of the same guy talking to himself. like he's got multiple personalities.

Tafrey Mongkuo:

Love the concept but the execution needs work.