Final Rating: 3.78. Finished 139 out of 231 entries.

505 views including the voting period.


Animator: Lucas Donaldson

Description: A 2d animation done with very basic, cartoony characters.

Experience: I'm a hobbyist. But still relatively new.

Time taken: 1 month


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Alice Reeve:

Nice expressions. I'd like to see more of a context and story.


This could've been helped a lot with a little more set building and attention to background

Adrian Winchell:

Nice to see someone attempting 2D. Main critique I have is - move your characters off center, and/or use a different line for the background element - it looks like they're just teleporting into the same space since the line stays put and they are in the same location.

Sabrina Winkel:

It's like the characters switch places in the same spot.. The only thing I like was his face at the last frame