Comments:
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Alice Reeve:
Nice expressions. I'd like to see more of a context and story.
Brianna:
This could've been helped a lot with a little more set building and attention to background
Adrian Winchell:
Nice to see someone attempting 2D. Main critique I have is - move your characters off center, and/or use a different line for the background element - it looks like they're just teleporting into the same space since the line stays put and they are in the same location.
Sabrina Winkel:
It's like the characters switch places in the same spot.. The only thing I like was his face at the last frame
Animator: Lucas Donaldson
Description: A 2d animation done with very basic, cartoony characters.
Experience: I'm a hobbyist. But still relatively new.
Time taken: 1 month