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I was very embarrassed
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Nice solid shot. I do question the intent behind the leatherjacket guy's pose and expression around frame 120. I assume he's meant to look smug and self-righteous, but it kind of comes off more as a 'scheming villain'-pose. I do like the progression from the pose into the more exasperated ones that follow. Nice work :)
could have done better gestures as your acting shots don't fit the scene, how can I say your acting is not something someone would do in real life when talking in this kind of scene with your current characters. lip-sync needs more work.
Haha, I love that wiggle at 90-130. Waiter seems a little less emotive/expressive than the audio but whatever. :)
haha that movement around @128 is great.
Awesome job ob the whole piece!
The techinal aspects of your animations are quite well done, but the acting itself doesn't sell your characters and what they are saying, specially the client. You are portraying a picky vegetarian guy who's kinda introvert, you can't go with a cocky john travolta's sidekick on Grease in my opinion.
S J Bennett:
Love that little sassy pyramid finger dance, icing on a very tasty cake.
Yuri Marcel Vieira:
I really like the smugness of the vegetarian! First time I've seen this sort of reaction. Good work!
Description: I was a vegetarian, I was very embarrassed
Experience: 3 year
Time taken: 7