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No Meat Please
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I feel as if you didn't get past your blocking out stage, there are no follow through or overlapping or even not enough in-betweens
It's kind of floaty. Study up on how to get rid of floatiness.
There needs to be a lot more body attitude to all these poses, and I think you need to work on the timing too. When the wolf/dog has its head turned away from the camera, you need to use more than just the lipsync to indicate he's talking.
Description: A man finds a wolf who doesn't eat meat.
Experience: 6 months
Time taken: 2 weeks