Comments:
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Adrian Winchell:
I wouldn't eat a gray chicken either. Your carnivore could use a few more eases on him like your vegetarian has.
Richard Adams:
The boy character doesn't match the mature man's voice coming out of him. Otherwise pretty good animation overall.
S J Bennett:
Poses are really good (especially on the nerdy guy) but the animation sometimes snaps too quickly.
Lucas Donaldson:
lip sync could use some work. but I like the body movements!
Animator: Sean Monteagudo
Description: I hope you guys like this dialogue. There's a lot of stuff I need to polish but any critiques are always welcome. I want to be a better animator and critiques are always the best way to grow.
Thanks for watching!
Experience: I am mainly a layout artist for a children's show but have done a few animated shots in the past.
Time taken: 1 week