Eric Raffle:

you need to practice your acting more as it was not right for the scene and your movement was not natural enough and the camera was too far away.

Adrian Winchell:

You could have framed this a lot closer so we could see the animation, the background isn't important.

S J Bennett:

Nice animation but a strange framing decision - could have gone in much closer.

Ryan Sivley:

Try a closer camera angle with the camera shifted to the left. No need for all that negative space .

Robert Zhou:

Great job, needs some work with staging. See some of the top animations for suggestions!