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by Luis Velasco
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Brilliant! I think the lip sync on "its a circle" might be slightly delayed though, but amazing work! One of the best, no doubt.
Great expressions and lip sync. I almost wish he was talking to Tars from Interstellar.
Wow. Lovely animation. The intensity and energy of the dialogue is matching. The subtle and limited actions are looking great. This is a top quality entry
wow, this is really good and the ending is brilliant- super good expressions (again second half)
...shame the lip sync in first couple of seconds is just not quite there (cheeks puff out a bit weridly around 2 for me)
this would have made it perfect- i'm not quite getting his message/emotion though?
Benjamin Osei Boateng:
Alex Ferreira Simões:
missing the punchline
A decent attempt on the lip sync, but it still needs work hitting on the right beats and the right mouth shapes. I think it was rather brave to try a close up. Good job on the putting some emotion behind the eyes.
Love the subtleties in the eyes! Great job!!
Subtle and beautiful. 10 stars
Marco Antonio Real Adame:
You take care of the breathing and I think that it is very important in this audio.
This is really great, but I think the audio is off a few frames, making the lipsync look a bit odd... At the start the jaw moves up and down too much.
I focused a lot on the mouth because it is centerscreen, you might want to frame it a little differently to have more focus on the eyes too.
Nice lip sync animation.
Nice acting! That's one sad astronaut lol. The eyes are really good. My favorite part was from around f130-f210 really nice work there on the eyes and the internal though. And around f322 he looks like he's about to cry! Cool..The only thing that I saw was the mouth animation on TH 'everything' and the M on 'dimension'. I would make those more accurate. Good work!
That's some really nice lip syncing and some nice mouth shapes too. I would've been nice to see a bit more body and have some more movement on there but if you were concentrating on the dialogue then it's looking pretty sweet. I would probably accentuate the mouth shape on "US" a little more as the dialogue emphasises it
Animator: Luis Velasco
Description: Nasa Astronaut going to the Eternity.
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 12/14 hours After Work.