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Nice staging and good expression of your character. The mouth animation I feel needs the most work. The card at the end looks cool, and a confident smile, which creates a change of emotion.
Very nicely animated. But the audio is coming before the lip animation. One more frame audio offset will give you a better result.
I loved the hold before "this is sphere". he is trying to search the word. Great.!
"But to them" - looked off the track to flow of your animation.
Watch the degree to which you open the jaw for the words. Some words, it only needs to open a little. Also there isn't a lot of hitting of the mouth shapes on the phonemes. Hand gestures are pretty good though!
Benjamin Osei Boateng:
Great work :)
Nice concept, facial expressions and lip sync animation. Not sure why is a "A" card a circle. Good job!
This was pretty good, aside from the lipsync. Maybe the lipsync isn't bad, but the audio is just offset? It looks off at least.
The lipsync needs more work but love the animation
The mouth needs a lot of work as it doesn't feel like the character is saying the words
Animator: Bartek Jerczynski
Time taken: 80h