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too gestural I'd say, don't take thins so literal. Nice animation otherwise.
The speaker's movements seem really erratic and quick - it doesn't seem to fit with the slow pace of the monologue. The idea is cool though.
This is tough, I want to like it, but the motions are far too jerky. I can see what you were going for with the more insane pose at the end, but it's too jarring.
This is bananas
In my opinion,too many key posses.Need to be smoother .
Interesting concept with the zoom out of the computer monitor at the end. Original main character. I think the mechanics are too fast and popping in some places (around f170 on the screen R elbow). Slow it down a bit. The secondary character's expression is gold.
Benjamin Osei Boateng:
You tried to fit way too many ideas into a few seconds. Watch out for overanimating.
Not quite sure I get the ending. Also, the main character is moving around way way too much. It's a very slow and methodical piece of audio and the movement should match it.
Toooooooo much movement
Really jerky movement in the performance. Hard to see past it.
Nice concept and facial expressions.
Movements seem a little to fast
Animator: Caesar Naranjo
Description: A man is explaining the m-theory to another guy, are they part from other dimension? are we?..
Experience: 4 months
Time taken: 7 days