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Sphere and Circle
by zhi shen
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Haha I like the dramatic performance. An intense character. I think your mechanics are looking pretty good, but I would add some more overlap/follow through to your movements, especially the big ones. For example on f90 his head it's a wall on the movement. I might also consider changing the camera angle, to a more 3/4 view. I think that may add a bit more appeal to the shot. On the part where he says 'now to us..' I think he's holding that for too long. It needs more there. Your choice of poses fit with the character you've created.
Feels alot pose to pose
you have the block, but you need more animation there. when has a lot of hold poses is boring.
Some of the head-down eyes-up poses are somewhat unflattering.
most of the acting looks robotic
Next time, try to fill up those pauses with something that adds to the story. Only got eleven seconds after all, gotta make the most of them.
Animator: zhi shen
Description: My first post, still have lot to improve
Experience: 2 and the half years
Time taken: 1 month (on and off )