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Nice. I think you hit some of the poses a little too hard. I do the same quite often too. Just settle in to them a bit softer with the curves. Nice emotion for the dialogue though.
The face on "eternity" really worked for the character I think you were going for. Good facial expressions, but it feels like his feet are pinned to the ground. If he's shifting his weight around, we need to at least get the impression his feet are shuffling around with it.
very nice activng choices and well done animation. 8
The upper body looks good, but watch those weight shifts. Since he doesn't move his legs, he just looks like he's swaying side to side. Sometimes he even looks off balance
Ejen Shafiq Isa:
it would be nice if the character is actually sitting down in hopelessness, more poses to explore
Pretty good, lacks some variation.
Nice Job! The up and down on frames (318-333) look a little weird on body weight.
Great though process! Only thing I see is that the holds feel too stiff. Nice work!
Animator: salman siavashi
Description: He is a miner...
Experience: 6 month
Time taken: 5 days