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2D Animation vs. 3D
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I like the scene and the setup, but the animation is not there yet, the expressions are good and the character fits well. Might be worth finishing and polishing.
Great plot with good animation.
Watch that he doesn't become too frozen during the holds. Hit the phonemes harder, especially during the first line of dialogue. But overall pretty good, and I like the scene you've set.
I think this has some nice character design, and the poses and movement pair well with the dialogue. One thing that popped out for me was he freezes in between poses which really took me out of the performance. (for example f111-f123) The eye direction at f331 is a little confusing for me. I'm not sure if he's recalling information, or if he's looking at something, or if he's rolling his eyes. Everything else was clear. Your composition looks good and I like the set. (I actually have a little poser doll just like that lol)
Great work! If you lessened the delay between the 2 hands falling, it would look more natural.
Very credible and clean animation. I love the concept.
Animator: Tobias Schlage
Description: A traditional 2D senior animator talks about the differences between 2D and 3D animation.
Experience: 1.5 years
Time taken: 2 weeks