Final Rating: 4.66. Finished 62 out of 206 entries.

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Animator: Idy

Description: A man explain Alien's vision of univers

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Benjamin Osei Boateng:

I like the attitude of the character, i feel the lip sync could have been better with one more pass

James Trimm:

some super nice gestures in there (particularly beginning) but still fell he moves around just tad too much- also, does his arm push the table into the floor? or is that a camera movement? i'm confused:)

Caesar Naranjo:

Need some improvement, but I think its good


all okay...but i think you didn't hear the audio properly.
you missed the secondary sound in between the dialogue..

Paula Decanini:

Overanimated, try to condense your ideas you want to convey in poses and expressions and hold them so they read better.

ben malberg:

I remember I saw your earlier submission from the forum, good to see the final submission. I like the poses a lot, and I think you captured the audio's character quite nicely in some of the action.
The blink at f48 looks a little poppy to me, I think because it closes half way quickly after the blink. f68 looks very nice, nice pose and action. The transition at f117 happens to quickly. The action around f268 with his L arm is too busy, I would simplify it.

Paul D. Cooke:

You've got some good stuff going on here! The mouth looks a little odd and I think it would be better with the hand not in front of the face. Keep it up!

Joyce Makker:

The movements aren't badly animated, there are just too many of them.

Sandra Tapia:

Good job! Animation looks smooth and facial expressions are nice.

Brent Forrest:

Your hand animation gives me happy feelings. I like this one. 8 stars


lipcnk cn b btr. 2many actions, U can giv a little more attnsn on refining ur key poses.