« Back to February Competition
The Alien with the Stash
by Sara Babbitt
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
some really nice follow through blocked out there!
Looking really good. Would have liked to see more inbetweens at the end of each phrase.
Good start. Could use more acting and action happening during the dialogue pauses.
Practice moving holds/subtle movements so that the character isn't completely motionless between pieces of dialogue. You may also want to consider drawing the rest of the figure through the waist/knees, so that we can understand what action he's doing that moves his location onscreen so much.
You know from f0-f65 it's pretty good, but then I feel it's lacking a lot of in-betweens. I like the alien concept though, and the hand gestures. I might try thinking of another way to use my hand gestures other then the literal expression of the dialogue. (ex: pointing to himself when he says 'us') Nice drawing skills though.
You need way more breakdowns dude 4.
Very rich on body poses and facial expressions. Love it!
Animator: Sara Babbitt
Description: An alien offers his advice.
Experience: ~1 year
Time taken: 1-2 weeks on and off