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Man from the moon
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I liked the acting choices, although you need to work a bit on your lip sync, try to be more precise with each sound in the voice-over. Would also be nice to see some more animations in the face :)
feels pose to pose
alot of parts are too slow
Love the little guy that shows at the end. I would probably work more on lip sync animation.
It's becoming pretty smooth, and I think you carved out some good brow expressions. I feel like f90, and f440 hits a wall with the hands, I think it needs an over shoot there based off the momentum. The eyes around f392 and f455 are moving independently. In my own piece I had the same issue, because in my blocking I moved the eye aim controller and then at some point down the line I started messing with the individual controllers of the eyes. I had to spend some time to clean up my mess.. Anyway, I liked some of your poses including the kung fu salute.
Description: An old man explains universe to his companion.
Experience: 2 months
Time taken: 20 days