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by Tony Godden
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Mouth movements aren't really in sync by the end.
Corey Aaron Burkes:
A little too lifeless. I know the dialog is rather 'still'; I think the animation could have projected more... 'animation'. Good effort all the same, though.
I think it would be good to first act out the animation so you would have a great understanding of poses. Keep going! :)
Animator: Tony Godden
Description: 2nd ever submission, went for a guy who's seeing things going on around the camera... or is he?....
Would love to hear any and all feedback, more I get the more I'll know how to improve.
Experience: Around 2 years, self taught.
Time taken: 11 days, few hours each day when I had time.