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Ambitious idea. Poor animation.
Concept's fun, animation is block-in level though.
Very rigid. A disaster. Eleven thumbs up.
...that got more sinister as it got along:)
maybe you can make less takes. the first take is good, 2nd is so long for the angle of camera and the last take is so fast I didnt understand what happened.
I like your original idea. The camera starts straight on, I think it would more appealing to have a more 3/4 view. When you cut from one shot to the next try to position the action in the same location on the screen. It's easier on the audiences' eyes.
I love the concept, really nice!
Description: The view of the world from the hen house...its just a matter of perspective.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: Done after hours over two weeks