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....what's he on about!
by James Trimm
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Benjamin Osei Boateng:
I think he's suppose to be drunk, but there seems to be way too much movement on his part.
Motions at the beginning were too sloshed for the audio, but as it went on the animations began feeling more in line with the tone. Good scene setup and color.
Im really confused about what this is. live action? animation?
Nice job! I really like the style and concept scene. I get that the old man is drunk but still, some poses feel a little odd.
You've got a very unique style, it's very whimsical. Not quite sure I follow his logic, not quite sure if I need to. But the gestures of the man overpower his tone of voice, I don't think it would hurt to bring his scope of movement down.
Looks good but the speaker looks more like a puppet than someone who has had a bit too much to drink. Need to float and drift around more on different axis to convey that he's drunk
Animator: James Trimm
Description: An old guy imparting some words of wisdom to a new arrival.....something about circles ...
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 1 week main guy; few days compositing/second guy etc.