Ben Hopper:

I think this one could be great if the animation gets another couple of polish passes. At the start, his acting is a bit off, but it ends nicely.

Brent Forrest:

Nice idea but your staging could ahve been a bit more clear. Did you storyboard your ideas first?

Paula Decanini:

If you want the character to squat down, have him go all the way down on the heel and balance on the toe. The pose you have looks awkward.

Sandra Tapia:

I love the idea of the scene. When he says " It's a circle, you could probably have used his right hand to show the circle.

Ejen Shafiq Isa:

nice setting :) itll be nicer if theres more contrasting poses to the performance.

ratna:

i think...if the torch would have been lit near frame 330 .....then it would b much better .....
nice concept and setup :)