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by Hakan Abbas
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JOYAL T. XAVIER:
good staging...but animation need to improve..(principles)
The 1st and last long shots are great - movement and particularly the walk at beginning are really good- the middle needs most work, feel his body floats/and is bit mechanical- more follow through needed (on arms on"us" for example)
With lots more polish I think this could be a great piece of animation. It lacks a lot in the acting department though, the animator should think more about nuances in the audio and convey that in the acting
ok but it's a bit boring u know,,
last pose looks a lil awkward...the thumb! otherwise its a good one
Good character acting!
PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
little stiff.. but simple and good..
Very nice concept.! I like the poses.
I like the poses and the secondary movement with the stick. One point I think is he has a big belly so I think his momentum should start and stop more slowly. Around f105 he stops a bit abruptly for the amount of weight he's carrying.
Animator: Hakan Abbas
Description: Theoretical Physics Lesson
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 4 days