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I like the face poses but I think you show a little too much teeth. I had a tricky time with my rig actually. Watch yourself speaking it in the mirror. I found it quite surprise how little you actually see the teeth in normal mouth movement.
Man, this one is really close to being great. I think a bit more attention to the timing is needed here.
Very intense. I liked it. It lacks a bit of polish, but it's still great.
great expressions, maybe you should give more movement on the shoulders
The atmosphere helps make the movements feel poignant. The hand shapes could use some better silhouettes, but in general I like the movements and pose choices even if they could use a bit more to make them stand out.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
I love the facial expression.. Well Done!!
Nice. I like the magic ness
Love the concept. Nice animation!
Nice shot, the hand feels slow at the end when he says circle
This is nicely done! And what a great concept. Loved the ending haha, that facial expression told it all. The one part that bugged me a little was the hand pose around f105, it just felt awkward to me, not sure why. Really smooth stuff.
Nice touch with the halo! Good foot-lighting and coloration here in this scene.
Animator: Michael Rivera
Description: A Lesson From Hell.
Experience: 6 years in the industry
Time taken: 5 days - 4-5 hours per day