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by Gero M
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There is some secondary actions that could have made this stronger (bills fingers during the intro). Also, try to get the "moving" holds in there. Over all this is a good concept
Really nice finish to this piece, the acting is really believable and realistic. Good work!
I like the personality of the guy on the left and the hole thing was very entertaining.
A few things I noticed.
1. From frames 100 to 130 the character on the right seems to float to his location compared to his walk from frames 47 to 99.
2. When the guy on the left turns his head at frame 131, it looks a little too rubbery or jello like.
3. It's hard to put my finger on it but the lip sync on the guy on the left feels off. I think that it could be because it may be a little bit too smooth and need to be snappier.
4. The last thing I'll say is that the guy on the right doesn't seem to move enough or react properly to the guy on the left.
While Bill's movements at the beginning are floaty, I like the walk cycle on the other man and the poses, lip sync and facial expressions are outstanding throughout.
Animator: Gero M
Description: A ''liar'' with a lumabgo.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks