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Nice job, and cute concept!
Lip sync needs work, great composition and I think you can push his final facial pose/expression a bit more..... in both characters. Nice job.
nice job. the lip syncing could have used a little more fine tuning though.
Needs a lot of improvement
Maybe that guy should actually hit... that would be a better place to stop the scene. Nice work.
I like the crazy eyes at the end! Haha.
good work, and ambitious. You're striving for comical acting which i like. You could add a view more frames, that are adding to the expressions.
You're bringing the idea across that he is crazy, but he could think a little more. In the break between the two sentences especially
Bill's leaning towards the left is awkward but the rest of the poses are fine. The animation and lip sync are consistent throughout. I like the scrunched-up pieces of paper moving in time to the small background sounds and the way the man in the white top reacts to Bill looking as if he is going to hit the spider.
Description: This is just a story about annoying spider in the office:)
Experience: About 3 years
Time taken: About 2 weeks